My submission for Lance's 100 Word Song, where the song this week was Bob Mould's See A Little Light. This is decidedly not the type of music I'd prefer to be listening to, but I'm sure lots of people said the same when I went with Radiohead's vastly unpopular Idioteque two weeks ago. So I played along anyway. Wikipedia tells me that this Bob Mould character raised a ton of money to support the legalization of same-sex marriage. And that is something I can get behind. So that's where I went with it.
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“You’ve never been ashamed a minute in your life.” It was a statement, not a question, as
she traced the curve of my shoulder with a single finger. I smiled, taking the last draw off my
cigarette before dropping it into the glass of scotch beside the bed.
“There’s no time for it,” I said. “There’s hardly time for this,” I said, kissing the spot just beneath her ear. “And I’d much rather do this.”
In the shower later, I would attack my skin with soap, bruising my breasts red with the effort of becoming clean enough to go home.
(Sorry for the whole don't-publish-jack-for-days-and-then-publish-twice-in-two-hours thing. I stick to a schedule on Trifecta. I can't be expected to keep it up over here, too.)
Dude, this is a great interpretation!
ReplyDeleteI love it. Thank you for your loyalty.
That was a very interesting ending, as I wasn't expecting her to feel shame - nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI like that a lot - I wasn't expecting the shame either - or that she might have a home to go back to where shame was the necessary emotion. Makes me wonder why the shame (which is, I'm sure, part of the point). Is it that she has a husband and any affair would be shameful? Is it that she has to return to parents who would quote curses?
ReplyDeleteI like it!
Great write! Love all that it leaves unsaid.
ReplyDeleteYes!!!
ReplyDeleteA lot of emotions swirling around in this piece. Nicely done.
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